What happened to the sunshine? Why did all the children go away? When did my favorite playground disappear? How come everything I love is no longer here? Why must the rain fall on my parade? How do I keep what is mine safe? The sunshine used to warm everything up. But there's no more yellow glow, I'm out of luck. Do I run away from the clouds? Do I sit inside and watch the rain fall down? Maybe I'll go splash in the puddles and mud. Then I'll sit and watch as the flowers bud. |
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Whoa. I wonder why I haven't put this up yet. It's not like I lost it or had more work to do on it.
This is pretty old compared to the last three things I put up, but it's still worth a read, I think. Please be a little more in-depth than the last person that told me what they thought. Obviously, I wanted to remind the reader that the sun's coming, even if it's raining now. I'm pretty sure I made that clear. Tell me something about my poem that I don't know.  |
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